tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5338119571208363621.post7078610853403497407..comments2021-08-26T00:52:24.714-04:00Comments on Atomic Swan Serials: "The Children of Gods" - Act VAtomic Swan Serials and If - E - Zinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11033977330353187241noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5338119571208363621.post-21262908019485996472007-07-06T18:58:00.000-04:002007-07-06T18:58:00.000-04:00Thanks for the time and effort invested in reading...Thanks for the time and effort invested in reading the tales, guys. I really appreciate it.Atomic Swan Serials and If - E - Zinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11033977330353187241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5338119571208363621.post-10910331348631038442007-07-05T22:58:00.000-04:002007-07-05T22:58:00.000-04:00I must agree, a very visceral, very visual style o...I must agree, a very visceral, very visual style of writing. I can picture Xiao-Tep, Wu Chan Chu, and Comet Fox in my mind. Fox's drunken swagger and fighting style especially stand out in my mind. Great work!BlueLobster1979https://www.blogger.com/profile/15143388301626067693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5338119571208363621.post-35839774376862677692007-06-30T20:02:00.000-04:002007-06-30T20:02:00.000-04:00This was a great ending to a great story, though I...This was a great ending to a great story, though I did wince at the whole "horn splitting the armpit nipple thing."<BR/><BR/>I have to say that this is a very image heavy and I found it all rich and arresting. I was able to really see all these characters in my mind's eye. Well done.<BR/><BR/>Also, I must say, the last bit at the end was reminiscent of Bradbury's Dandelion Wine. =)<BR/><BR/>Good job! And thanks.Lady Tianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11753868252108898748noreply@blogger.com